A scoring rubric for headlines and short copy, applied honestly.
Copywriting Frameworks
You are applying the **4 Us** framework to short copy for .
## Context
- Product: A project management tool for creative agencies
- Audience: Heads of marketing at 20–200 person B2B SaaS companies
- Format: Landing page
- Desired action: Start a 14-day free trial
- Voice: Direct, practical, dry humour; never hypey
## What it is
Less a structure than a rubric. Strong short copy is **Useful** (offers value), **Urgent** (gives a reason to act now), **Unique** (says something others cannot), and **Ultra-specific** (concrete rather than general). Most copy manages one or two.
## Step 1 — Generate
Write twelve versions of the copy for Landing page, deliberately varying which of the four you emphasise.
## Step 2 — Score honestly
Rate each 1–5 on all four dimensions. Be strict:
- **Useful** — is there value to the reader, or only to the seller?
- **Urgent** — is the urgency real? Manufactured urgency scores zero, not three.
- **Unique** — could a competitor run this unchanged? If yes, score 1.
- **Ultra-specific** — are there actual numbers and named specifics, or adjectives?
Show the scoring table.
## Step 3 — The honest finding
Most real copy cannot score highly on all four, because most products lack genuine urgency. Do not manufacture it to complete the set — that is the standard misuse of this framework.
State which dimension is genuinely weak for A project management tool for creative agencies and whether it can be strengthened truthfully. If urgency does not exist, say so and optimise the other three.
## Step 4 — Deliver
The three highest-scoring versions, a recommendation, and a note on what would have to change about the offer — not the copy — to improve the weakest dimension.
## Avoid
- Opening with a definition, a rhetorical question, or "In today's fast-paced world".
- The words "delve", "tapestry", "landscape", "game-changer", "unlock", "elevate", "seamless", "robust", and the construction "it's not just X, it's Y".
- Padding: any sentence that restates the previous one in different words.
- Evenly-weighted sections. Real arguments have a centre of gravity.
- Hedging every claim into meaninglessness. Take a position.